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Hi, pretty lady
Sweety of mine
I long to touch your hair
Braid you a smile
Caress its waves
As we watch tv on the couch
Your head on me
Or mine on yours
Nothing more nothing less
Some quality time

To share with you your interests
Be it gossip or teary "soaps"
If Church is your passion
We may not agree
But respect it I will
And share the experience with you
Would be my wish

If you play video games
To play side by side
Or take turns if need be
Be playful and bashful
Push you so you don't win
Let you get in that last Boss "kill"
Be known as the couple that's "hip"

To take long strolls
Oh wouldn't it be sweet?
On the beach at night or early morn'
Leaving our perfect-pair footprints on the sand
Lay down and soak the sun
Or build a castle on the shores
If it be night
Could we not hear the crashing waves?
Sharing a beautiful kiss
Under the moonlight's iris

Perhaps on the park
To walk under the trees
And make out on the bench a bit
To hear the birds sing
And see the surrounding greenery
A few photos wouldn't miss
My model, my beauty, my queen
Hand by hand walking there and here

On a lazy afternoon
After having dinned or lunched
If there is an interesting film
We could go to the theater
See a movie together
Bit of popcorn and a drink
Chat over the details and hidden hints
Over coffee no less
A bit of candy here and there
A pleasant afternoon I think

Or go forward to the mountains
Dessert or forest or streets
Exploration the name of the game
Together, with camera in hand
Bonding as we seek new sights
Flirting with eachother as we step into new lands
Bit of cardio never hurt
Getting fit together, another fun thing

At night, if its too cold outside
We can snuggle up together
By the fire's light
No tv, no radio, no computer
Just some light and a  book perhaps?
Reading to eachother like some do
Sharing the story in our minds as well as in words
If it be raining
We could hear the falling tears
Crashing on the window's pane
Oh sweetheart, couldn't we draw or paint our love?

Intimacy could take over
Depends on you, dear
To run my fingers softly down your legs
Around your curves, big or small, I don't care
To me you are perfection, oh yes you are dear
To kiss your neck softly, a hickey may sneak in
Softly up to your ear, whispering secrets of love
Crescendo in the meeting of our lips
First softly, then a bit more lust
You said you didn't bite!
But I can too ;)
It can be our secret day
Flirting like lovers do
Massaging your every inch
Your legs, your waist, your back
Oh your shoulders, how soft they are
A kiss merits all your sight
All over your body, if that's what you want.
A night to remember...and to repeat
Like a couple in love we are

If my professional passion you sought to share
Diving and snorkeling we could do
If you know not how to swim
I could help you there
Sharks? Don't you worry love
It is my career and profession
No sharks will come near
Afterwards, or before, whichever you like
A visit to the aquarium to meet the fish
And in the future if we make trips:
Sea World or Disney I think would fit
Yet Europe, at the distance, I too see ;)

If you be sad
I shall bring some chocolates and roses
So I can cheer you up
See you blush on your cheeks
Kiss your pretty nose and tickle your feet
Some candy and funny jokes to see you laugh
Or if you are sick some chicken soup and tea
Be it your Birthday?
No problem! Some gifts and wine
A beautiful dinner can not be missed
Under the moonlight or at sunrise
I'll make it special you'll see
Even if I am not rich

Your best friend?
Here I am my dear
I can hear your every word
Even if you say none
I seek your happiness and safety
Your enjoyment and your smiles
To do anything to make you happy
That is why I'd give you my heart
Your problems I'd gladly carry on my back

To explore eachother's lives
To know your weaknesses and your fears
Your favorite things and your least
As you'd know mine
To help you succeed
And pick you up when you fall down
To be your support in good health or in bad
To be the strength you need to go fight

My dear girl
There is so much I'd wish to say
But this is what I'd wish or expect
To be able to bring you today and tomorrow and everyday
This is what I see in my future
That of my girlfriend's and mine
I'll die to make it a reality
As long as you stay by my side

And to end this
Like the poet I am
Here is a verse
From me to your heart:
"Be the light of my days
Be the dark of my nights
Be the dew of my morning's sight
Be the shine of my moon's rise
My heart, my smile, my confidant
The candle within this tattered soul
The warmth to this scared life
My lady, I love you, and that's the end of this rhyme."
This is a very personal note/thought of my heart
It started as many dreams, thoughts and wishes
And I decided to make them a poem for my love
For her heart and for mine
It is very special to me
And reveal thing's I've always dreamt about
And how I've always wanted to treat my love
And how I see our future to be
It is only a glimpse
But it is very special to me

Take care of the ones you love
Respect them and give them your all
Your future together will be all smiles I hope

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CloakedApprentice Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Student General Artist
This needs a publisher.
And to be titled: "The Guy's Guide to Being a Perfect Partner"
But that's optional :aww:
AztecTemplar Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwwwwww heeheheh you think so?! :D
OMG YESSHHHH!!! :D hehehe Im glad you feel that way hehe
CloakedApprentice Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Yesh I do :meow:
lol YAY I'm glad you're glad! :la:
AztecTemplar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student General Artist
hehehe always :D
SammyVollmer6 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Photographer
Your an ahmazing writer!!
AztecTemplar Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student General Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ehehehe you think so?!
That means so much to me hehhe I'm glad you like my work!! :D
SammyVollmer6 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Photographer
im big on writing to .. i have a peice of my writing on my page if you wanna check it out lol
AztecTemplar Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student General Artist
You mean "Him"?
I saw it. It's very touching and beautiful and honest. I think its amazingggg and you should write moreeee :3
SammyVollmer6 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Photographer
thank you .. im gonna read it at open night lol (:
AztecTemplar Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student General Artist
awwww really?? wow that's awesome! Ppl are gnna love it
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